Unreal Punishment (Patreon)
Published:
2020-11-30 19:35:59
Imported:
2023-12
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I am open to this story being reworked. It was inspired as described in the footnote. The rake turned into a woman is an old trope used in movies like "Goodbye Charlie", "Switch" and "Sam" but because of the magical element I have never pursued it. The scenario where the offending rakes are trapped in some VR world might be possible - see my story "Virtuality". It came out as dialog between them, but if reworked it may be descriptive. What do you think?