Unreal Punishment (Patreon)

I am open to this story being reworked.  It was inspired as described in the footnote.  The rake turned into a woman is an old trope used in movies like "Goodbye Charlie", "Switch" and "Sam" but because of the magical element I have never pursued it.  The scenario where the offending rakes are trapped in some VR world might be possible - see my story "Virtuality".  It came out as dialog between them, but if reworked it may be descriptive.  What do you think?