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Backseat Bargain 16 (Patreon)

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2020-05-13 00:16:54
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So I figured it was high time to ditch the handwritten dialogue since let's be honest, I don't have the prettiest handwriting, but also keeping it consistent is damn near impossible. Plus I'm told it's just much easier to read this way. What do y'all think?

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Dahtii

Thank you. It’s way easier now

dagafed

this text looks better in the non high resolution version

Dahtii

MillyDeer

Hot hot hot

dagafed

speaking of text, please release the dialogue for previews, even if only as text in a comment

NilaPomf

,,i,- you

Stu Fox

What Trew said about Comic Sans. I'm still loving the fact Judy's "just doing it" as opposed to liking it. I hate the porn trope of the character not liking it, then liking it. Finnic degrading Judy as a fuck doll is more original than Judy suddenly being into it.

DrBDiddly

Yeah using typset dialog is much better reading you can always make your own font to make it more distinct if you really want. And! You get the option of giving characters different fonts for personality reasons which can work awesome when done well.

MillyDeer
>>36808110

Finnick: God damn, I'm gonna fill that bunny hole to the brim! Judy: Do you-ah! Really need to keep talking? Finnick: Kiss me. Judy: Huh? *muffled kissing noises* Finnick: Well, well, well, she IS into it! Judy: Oh my god, look, if it helps you get off faster, I'll play along! Finnick: Whatever you say, officer.

Stu Fox
>>36808135

Sorry, Siroc, I was so enraptured with the action that I only took a cursory glance at the font. I stand corrected. My apologies.

ArtAnimationFan
>>36808135

Again man, I have to agree, the "just doing it" mood is awesome. Although I wouldn't exactly say he's degrading her like that. I think it's more like teasing mixed with dirty talk.

ArtAnimationFan

The font certainly is easier to read. But rather than Comic Sa- nah I'm just kidding, but rather than the font you're using, maybe find a font that's closer to your writing. I'm saying that because you handwriting mixed with the art carried a certain style to it that this font slightly contradicts.

sirocistan
>>36809358

Alright, I'll do some poking around and see what I can find and use before Friday :)

Stu Fox
>>36808135

This is probably head-canon, but I've always imagined that Judy would act stuck-up around Finnic because she views him as a common con-fox and a toxic influence on Nick. The idea of Finnic kinda pulling her down a couple of notches by being rough and dirty with her and making her have to take it is quite appealing.

ArtAnimationFan
>>36809358

Sounds good. And hey, if there’s multiple choices you can’t decide between, maybe another poll is in order :)

Jonathan

i like it keep it that way get more invested

dagafed
>>36808110

For me is the other way around. Seeing the comic without dialogue spoils the full experience