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Some WIPs (because I have nothing else to show) (Patreon)

Published:
2019-10-18 02:08:41
Imported:
2021-08

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I may be starting a couple WIPs over. These are looking fine, but they are both second-drafts as well. I'm moving much slower than I use to, I think. I'm not even sure what the ideas here are. I don't even have a joke for the second one. Maybe I should just stop trying to be funny. It makes everything feel forced and cringe (more cringe than my art already being smut). Maybe that's why it all feels fake and tacky. 

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Dantels

Yeah let the jokes flow only when they feel natural.

Greg

Hey man, is the second one supposed to be the one I asked for?

Personal Deviant

I wouldn't say your smut is cringe, it serves its purpose and people enjoy it. Sure, you wouldn't show it to your mother, but simply because you wouldn't show something off in polite company doesn't mean it's devoid of value. As for the jokes, if you enjoy them I'd keep them in, but I don't think it's a necessary part if you feel annoyed by it.

ultrafighter3000

Let it go natural like the tits and cocks giving it an spectacular result. Your works sure bring smiles to many and thats because its you beig you with your artwork showing the message and meaning.

markydaysaid
>>28004702

More or less. I'm struggling with the final panels, showing them being blue-balled in their pants. I think only Wade may fit in the final panel.

makai9

I mean its not like a gutbuster but the visual gag with the twerking is a cute resolution to a simple set up and that's what it was supposed to be right? Not every joke can be super funny. Even actual comedians know this. It served the purpose for the piece and let you draw cave girls twerking with a whimsical cute tone. The lines themselves look great. You're tripping again bro and putting yourself in a negative mode. I swear you need to completely redo how you do patreon, finish your current commitments then switch to just drawing what you want, some of it is public some folks gotta pay for. No more commissions for awhile. You're going to make yourself hate doing this bro. Which would be a shame because I don't think you do actually hate doing it. Just my 2 cents.

John Smith

Works for me you are way too harsh on yourself Mark

Ace

Looking awesome