WIP? (Patreon)

So . . . Eh?

I think it sucks. I rushed into it without no idea of what I was really doing. Initial idea was of Zack grabbing Kasumi's ass and checking it out while Hayate watched. Then I added Ayane. Then I threw in two more panels. Gross. It looked . . . Awkward. It looks like something I would have drawn in 2015. 

I'm going to try again. Something simpler. Just the idea from the top panel. Zack grabbing Kasumi's ass and checking it. Hayate and Ayane may stay. I'm just not digging the 'vibe' I have going here. It's soft and messy. I'd like Zack to come off as a bit more dominant, and Kasumi as a bit more shocked/bashful, but also intrigued. I don't know. I just need to get ONE panel right, rather than have THREE panels that are crap.

I'm not giving up! Just starting over.