Story: Batman Fucks Gotham (Patreon)

So, I've been trying to write a story for a long time now, unsuccessfully. I'll start a story, think about where I'm going with it, but then I'll lay down WAY too much exposition and WAY too many characters in a desperate attempt to cram in every fetish I like. Milfs, cute innocent eighteen year old girls, twink boys, big-dicked Chads, White bimbos, Black studs, Asian sluts, bla bla bla. I try for too much and I go too big. I aim too high, so I always miss. The worst part is, I usually don't realize that a story is garbage until I'm about 2,000 words into it. 

But I finished one! I sort of cheated by picking an established franchise to parody (Batman), and I kept a word clock going to make sure I wouldn't go past 5,000 words. Wherever the story was at about 4,000 words, I decided I would stop there and pick it up again with a new chapter. Keeping a word clock really helped. It reminded me to not spend a thousand words describing something that could be boiled down to about twenty words (really).

So, please read it and give me feedback. If there are any errors in spelling and/or grammar please help me out. WARNING! My stories can get really gross, since I write them to suite myself, so if you're offended by violent sex, drug use, and BDSM, don't bother. There are a lot of themes about 'maledom' specifically in this story, which means that some big bad patriarchal men assert their dominance over some stubborn feminists by raping them into submission. It's a fantasy. Fiction. 

(PDF is attached below).