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I've got a few irons in the fire right now. I really am trying to power through this ladybug comic, but ugh, this on doesn't look so great. Luckily it's just story fluff. I'm not sure what Page 8 will be. I COULD get straight to the action with The Cougar abducting Adrien while he's flirting with Julica and Rose, but what I'd like to do is have Marinette have a run in with Chloe first, since that's more in keeping with the spirit of the show. 

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Dantels

Oh no, I was hoping the cute little redhead would go unmocked. Ah well.

Ultrasound7

I doubt even you could resist to draw a blonde, bratty would-be dom and risk a cat fight with the protaganist. Not to mention her sub assistant.

Dantels

Marinet loos a little small and her arm looks really off, though i guess you're going for a more chibi look on this peaceful page with the big heads? (I realize the show had big heads but not quiiite this big proportionally.)

Greg

You would have all my money forever if Marc’s a big buff dude. Also, wouldn’t the obvious side joke for panel 1 be “ménage a trois” cus France?

markydaysaid

I wasn't going to, but then they introduced a gay love interest for him, and I just thought, "WOW! Marinette friend-zoned him so hard that they had to introduce a pity-dick character for him," and that cemented it for me.

markydaysaid

No, the art here is just bad, and I don't want to spend another hour fixing it, so it's just going to stay bad.

Master Dragon

Nice job on the comic. I like those extra chicks that are suggesting the threesome.

Ace

Looking good, i would not go straight into action, pacing is important and the idea to put some extra is good