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Writing Help (Patreon)

Published:
2017-12-09 06:52:38
Imported:
2021-08

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I've really had trouble writing recently. Over the past few months, I've started about twenty different stories, and some of them have gotten to be thousands of words long, but then I get bored or frustrated with it and I quit. I think I have two major problems. 1) I can't decided on a simple premise, I keep trying to fit in everything thing I like and represent every fetish imaginable, and 2) too many characters. TOO MANY CHARACTERS!

I think what will help break me out of this rut is writing a short, simple story with only one situation, and maybe a couple characters. Less is more. More is nothing. I just don't know what to write. I'm so frustrated that I can't settle, so maybe hearing what you all would read would help. I don't know. 

A) Sexy milf lives in a suburb. Maybe she has kids, maybe not, I'll decide when I write it. She's having major troubles with some 18 year old punk kid. He's cute and cocky, but also a total dick, and a bully. Eventually she gets sick of him, so she challenges him to a sex-fight. If she out-fucks him, he'll leave her alone. If he out-fucks her, she'll be his slave for a week. 

B) Cute boy with a big dick is sexually frustrated because none of the girls in his class will have sex with him. His dick is just TOO big. He gets bonked on the head in an accident, and wakes up in a parallel universe where everyone is having sex all the time, like a hentai universe or something. I don't know. I could use help on this one since the premise alone would take too long to set up. I might have it start right after his accident, and just explain his situation in retrospect. I can already tell that this premise is too big and would have too many characters.

C) Cute boy has a cute girlfriend, cute mom, and a cute life in a cute town. Then a bully moves to town. A PSYCHIC bully. He uses his powers to hypnotize people so he can humiliate them or fuck them. The cute boy protagonist is the only one who realizes what's going on, because although he can't resist the bully's influence, he is able to remember what happens, unlike everybody else who forgets. SPOILER WARNING: the bully wins. 

I'm opening this vote to all my Patrons, not just the $5 and above, because I don't know who of you came to me because of my stoires. I assume not many, but I want this poll to be for you. Comment below about ideas also. Simpler the better. If you get specific about your 'original character' or anything like that I'm probably going to ignore it. 

Comments

That black guy

I'd say A. because it sounds like a similar promise to your rusty stuff

makai9

Ey fam A or C both sound good to me but its got to end up with a MILF pregnant with a (much) younger man's baby either one that's picked 😤😤😤😤

Dantels

Honestly B is something I like but It'd probably be better if you preemtively cut down the number of characters.

somethingpurple67

C seems like it has the potential for manipulation, and forcing characters to do humiliating, degrading, or "same family"things.

John Smith

Well i like B but yeah seems like that have too many characters.....C you have done it before. So A I guess but honestly I prefer a sequel to Savage Girls, More Nadia or a Sequel to Sex Fights.

Ace

Be careful with the so many characters, even authors with popular series (naruto/Bleach) fall for that one, try to not introduce a character if an older one can fill the roll, the options sound interesting. C already seem to have too many characters, so for a simple one A or B sound better

Anonymous

I write stories commissions part-time I'm going to give you a smidgen of advice, but take it like a grain of salt. I'm no expert or anything, just a goof who writes smut. First and foremost, to improve your writing, you have to read other's work. It builds up your vocabulary and makes you think "Huh, I could have written this scene better." Next up is just writing. Set aside part of your day, be it five minutes or half an hour, and just write. If you don't write regularly, your abilities atrophy. You have created three distinct universes thus far and each one has all manner of possibilities for one-shots. Idea B would be ridiculously easy for Mark and Cadence's universe with the cute boy in question landing right in on Cadence and Briar while they are lounging in in a hot spring or taking a bath in a stream. This goes to the next bit of advice I have: use what you have available. Why create a new universe for a scenario when what you already have will suffice for an idea? Idea A would work perfect for Rusty (boy this can get confusing since we have the same name). But imagine there's a next door neighbor who sees the wimpy kid as an incarnation of all that's good and innocent and she despises how bullies (male and female) abuse him. She takes it upon herself to do something with one of the bullies (obviously she'd end up getting turned into a cock-addicted slut because that kid has shit luck). Anyway, that's my two cents. Like I said, take what I said as a grain of salt. I'm not expert. Just thought I'd help if I could.

Anonymous

As another part time writer, I completely agree with both Ace and King Rusty. Setting time aside to practice is a must, as is not getting frustrated with yourself. I don't see any reason you couldn't use existing characters for new ideas, or run through old scenes with fresh faces (whichever one costs you less brain power). My final piece of advice is "Just Post It", because exactly like drawn art, you'll always be overcritical of the product without an outside perspective to give you feedback. Just remember, my dude, we all love your work, be it arts or writan.

Anonymous

A because dominant people who are used to winning being forced to lose is far better than submissive people losing :)