November Pin Up - Sketch (and thumbnails) (Patreon)

We're going back to hot sunny afternoons this picture - because I miss it, and because its where this month's lady belongs...

Eva Salah, at training!

Winding down after an intense session...

I'm actually hoping to hear from you guys on this one! I've attached a couple of the thumbnails as well as the sketch. I've departed in the pencils from the thumbs as an attempt to "improve" the composition... but seeing it now I'm not entirely convinced.

Think the rough thumbs work better? Anything from the pencil you prefer?

Let me know and

Enjoy!