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I'm not quite sure if I like the ending or not. And the sparkling from the mouth is not really what I wanted either. Should I try to clean up the ending a bit more before the final release? Let me know what you guys think

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Anonymous

Did this vid ever get completed ? My b if slice posted something related to it

SukkuroKun

I agree the sparkling does look a bit odd. Though, while the ending does seem a tad underwhelming, I'm not sure what I could suggest you add to it to spice it up.

Anonymous

I agree with sukkuro

KirschKiller

Yeah the sparkling effect looks weird, but all in all it looks very nice 👌🏻

CristopherOS

I still wish she swallow her after the kiss xD

Blake

It seems really good! If you wanted a more... idk "active" or a more conclusionary ending, you could have her just grow a little or lot more and accidentally getting her mom stuck to her breast/over her nipple all stretched out as she "crushes" her, being able to see V's nipple over her mom's body. Either having V looking guilty/like oh crap now I'm really in trouble as a freeze frame or maybe flustered herself as Elastigirl is, based off previous reactions, trying to not look flustered/blushing either or possibly cant help herself but have her face give away she's enjoying it to V. Would make use of her moms powers, tho idk how hard that could be actually animating, but it could be a potentially more solid ending frame? Idk just an idea but the way it is is still really good! I especially like V interacting with the city and her clumsy/adjustment movements through the experience.