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The Return of The Nanase

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Nanase: "That's right! I took out FOUR of your minions!

Gimli: "That still only counts as one!"

Nanase: "What?"

(Apologies for The Lord of The Rings movie reference, couldn't resist.)

Editing is important. Today's example: I originally wrote this as two comics.

The first would have set up that Nanase was taking a couple combat rounds to get back, the minions had been defeated, and only Marik The Cleric, holding Maribel the chicken, remained.

The second would have been Marik The Cleric boasting, followed by Nanase's return.

It took me longer than it probably should have to realize I should be more efficient, but part of me was also like "TWO WHOLE COMICS WRITTEN! YES!"