Who Is Ellen - 133 - HD (Patreon)

Published:

2023-05-23 03:00:02

Imported:

2023-05

Content

A group effort.

- At egscomics

Commentary

"It had to both high priority AND ridiculous!"

In the end, it was the party as a whole that drove Marik the Cleric to kidnap a fancy chicken.

GO TEAM!

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Comments

Thisguy

This is a very interesting plot. On one hand, it recognises Nanase as a plot essential character, or a plot driver. On the other hand, it establishes the others as the ‘spanned in the works’ and how they can exert control

2023-05-23 04:47:58.670000

Chordat

I have to admit, I was expecting this adventure to be a silly little way for the characters to goof off. I was NOT expecting it to also include well-written conspiracy, betrayal, and comedy of errors coming from Ellen's decision to improv based on the party's distrust of an NPC's absence. Would that I could plot this well!

2023-05-23 08:29:23.246000

John Trauger

>>109121352

...especially plotting spur-of-the-moment.

2023-05-23 13:22:45.700000

Wild Card

He's monologueing....

2023-05-24 00:35:50.240000

Michael Chui

>>109121352

Yeah, what John said. I'm a little awed by Ellen's skill here, but I'm terrible at storytelling, so what do I know.

2023-05-24 00:39:18.902000