Homestuck: The Condesce & Roxy Lalonde (Patreon)

Now this is a winning combination. I think I've enjoyed almost every piece that I've seen with these two. Also, I'm trying to get a bit more fluid with my expressions! Admittedly, there are still some things that I could have done with this piece to still make it better... but I'm kind of tired of working onn it, and I think it might just be fine as it is. 

What do you guys think? Not necessarily everything needs to be gone over multiple times with lines right? Do you think it could benefit from more line weight?