The Secret of Kohinata-san Chapter 1 Draft (Patreon)

Hello everyone, I'll try to update more frequently every weekend starting next week.

All of the pages that you will see here are at the earliest stage. All pages are subject to change at any point. Feel free to become my editor by leaving a comment below on anything that you feel like improving, like the dialogues and stuff. English is my second language so any help is appreciated.

Random: See you tomorrow!

Random: Bye bye!

Kohinata Mana: It's so hot today.

Unnamed Friend of Mana: Hewo Mana

Kohinata Mana: Yo!

Unnamed Friend of Mana: Did your mom came to pick you up?

Kohinata Mana: Yeah, Mama should be here somewhere.

Kohinata-san: ...Happy Halloween?

Kohinata Mana: It's not Halloween...

Kohinata-san: ...Ehh? Mana-chan?

Kohinata Mana: And...

Kohinata Mana: WE ARE IN THE MIDDLE OF SUMMER!

Unnamed Friend of Mana: EH?

Kohinata-san: "Ara Mana-chan, You have gotten really strong."

Kohinata-san: "You are really living up to your name..."

Kohinata-san: My sweet Mankey-chan

Kohinata Mana: HA? You want another one?

Kohinata-san: z z z z

Watson Mia: Kohinata-nyan...

Watson Mia: I heard a very loud noise nya. Are you okay?

[Mia Watson -Pre-school teacher]

Kohinata-san: AH!

Watson Mia: Oh, you're awake.

Kohinata-san: Ara Mana-chan. It's late in the afternoon, Your mom will worry. You should go home.

Kohinata Mana: I'll punch you.

Watson Mia: You can't say that Mana-chan. Punching people is not ladylike.

Watson Mia: Mana-nyan

Kohinata Mana: Teach, your whiskers hurts

Watson Mia: Kohinata-san...

Kohinata-san: !

Watson Mia: What are you doing? Why can't you pick her up normally?

Kohinata-san: EEK!

Watson Mia: This is the 5th tree you have knocked this week.

Kohinata-san: Please don't be mad Mia-chan.

Kohinata-san: Look at this!

Watson Mia: GRRR

END ..for now

Here's some info dump. If you don't care about spoilers, feel free to read

What is this world? Why do I see some races that belong to fantasy world?

This world is set in an alternate timeline. Races from other planets found their way to our planet way back even before history learned to write about history. Therefore similar to you and me, we can see other races like they have been here since the beginning.

What is Kohinata-san's name? 

It's a secret for now. I'm having trouble finding a name that fits for her.

What's with Mana's superhuman strength?

It's a secret for now. It will be explained at later chapters.