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Willie J

Deal fulfilled. Quite the ending. Awesome story.

Southernfatboy

Great ending! And he didn't lose weight!

Oracle250

Loved this story and all the art that went with it.

Anonymous

Apparently I predicted the plot twist. Still, wonderful story. Loved it.

Anonymous

So happy it ended this way. Amazing story, amazing drawings . The off screen boom it is a very cool idea, so it is not as gross as it could be. I love the dark and bad ending of this story

ChubBrush

I was actually rooting for a happy ending for Alex; some form of redemption. But unfortunately, some people, the choice to seek selfless redemption or to ask for forgiveness, making honest efforts to change one's behavior, doesn't happen or happens to late for the consequences of their actions to produce a happy ending. Bravo on creating this engaging story. Though I'm not a fan of the gaining and suffering genre, the writing and illustrations kept me hoping Alex would come out of this having learned to be a nicer and more gracious person. Thank you for pouring hours of time and energy into these stories.

lokitu

No artwork? It should be there. It loads fine for me.

lokitu

Thank you for the feedback Jeremy. I do appreciate it and take everyone’s comments on board. I knew the darker tone wasn’t going to be for everyone, but after Max & Roy I wanted to tell almost the opposite kind of story, to present variety in the stories on here. The next story will be different in tone again.

hugefatfat

Absolutely Brilliant work!

Carl Quaif

A dark story, with a dark ending...it couldn't really have gone any other way. Beautifully written, Lokitu. Bravo!

Sideburns

Torn between feeling ridiculously jealous of this poor jerk and his beautiful comeuppance, and also now side-eyeing the number of unread messages I've blown off on Grommr in fear. Magnificent.

Detroitdesignguy

“Not even human anymore” this was incredible!

Anonymous

I am new to your Patreon & have to say, I love it! I have to admit, I have only read 2 of your stories (Max & Roy, & Deal w/ the Devil) but this one is my favorite - The best part, IMO, is Alex in the back of the truck tearing into 3 bags of pig feed just to satiate himself......so good! I was not ready for him to pop just yet, I wanted to be on this journey with him a bit longer. Great story, and can't wait for more from you! keep up the good work.

lokitu

Thanks so much for the kind words! I'm glad you're digging the stories so far :)

Anonymous

THAT'S A GREAT STORY POOR ALEX I WISH I CAN HUG HIM ,

Anonymous

I am starting to understand how the 'suffering' part of Weight Gain or EXTREME WEIGHT GAIN is more realistic and sometimes more HORRIFIC. Gainers fantasize what it is all about. But I am sure there is another side to the story that may actually be HORRIFIC. Not everyone is Super Strong Sumo Wrestler that battles to GLORY ! I think a dose of reality of what life 600+ lbs is like is due. PLUS the AUTHOR THAT DOES SO CUTS A NEW GENRE and more.......... publicity? Is that the correct word? Someone help me here: it is a vocabulary word that I am to tired to remember.