Transforming Silk (Patreon)

Hello, what did you think of this story that I used to close the arc of stories in that alternative line? (the one from Ardeal, the one from an alternate history world from the 19th century plunging the world in the next four centuries into a kind of eternal feudal dark ages), and I would greatly appreciate some feedback (it doesn't matter if it was a harsh criticism, the feedback will always be good), this does not mean that this story is the last in that universe (but that the following stories in that universe will not coincide with a linear story, in the following months I will make a scheme like with Mental Illness Saga to explain its co-relationship), but I personally don't feel particularly satisfied with this story, it was done very quickly in a week together with all the September and October stories (around 9 or 10 stories) so that it can be drawn in advance before my graphic artist went on vacation, which means that I have written this story with a lot of pressure and physical and emotional exhaustion, and on the other hand I think that the substitute graphic artist has something some problems to draw Ina naked given the short time in which him made the drawings for this story (something that him improved in later drawings where him was more careful).

So I have decided to publish this week an extra drawing of a commission that was done some time ago of a spider trapping someone in its web and turning it into a kind of wax doll, to compensate for the lack of this week and to give it more dynamism to the content this week. So maybe I'll post some extra drawing (not always but if every time I feel the quality doesn't meet our usual standards, maybe next weekend I'll post another extra drawing) after each story this September and October (of many individual commissions extras that the usual graphic artist or ageha, with whom I outsource linearts, which I have saved waiting for the best moment to publish them), I think we have received very good support and a lot of acceptance this month with the substitute graphic artist (not only have we remained stable but we have increased a bit in subscribers) and I think you our subscribers deserve more, I hope you enjoy it.

Anyway, what do you think of the last story?