Preview from page #14 (Patreon)

Hi everyone!  I just want to give an update on page#14.  Here's just a few of the panels however the rest will sort of spoil future pages.  I am really having fun drawing the girl's relationship however I'm having trouble working Farryn into this scene but I'll find a way to sneak her in.  The trouble with having three main characters is trying to give all of the girl's enough screen time.

In the spirit of constantly changing things, I'm not (or really ever) happy with the title.  I like the word "Peril" in it but the "Doves" part is just something I'm going to try and phase out.  "Dungeon Peril" was one idea but still, not 100% happy with that.

Maybe a play on words with "Peril" and "Pearl"?

Annnyways... I took way too long writing pages 14-16 but now that the dialogue is done, pages should be coming quicker now and I'm hoping that #17 will be done by the end of the month.

BOOBY BUCKS...

I have one commission and two comics to do and I simply didn't have enough time while drawing this comic so I am planning on taking the month of August to do those.  One is a Little Lorna comic, another is an original story and a third is for me to draw their girlfriend.

This will be a tall order to get these done but I'm going to try!  I'm sorry if I take a few shortcuts to get it all done but hopefully it will only be noticeable to myself.