Your Professional Eye! (Patreon)

I tried working on a sort of abbreviated Little Lorna style by simplifying the shapes of the arms, legs, hands and feet (including knees and ankles).

Which kind of brings me to why you guys are so important in the creation of Little Lorna comics and art!  I think your critical appreciation of art is really important in its developement.  I really have grown to depend on your feedback on details of the art and stories and although it may not seem like it helps make it better.

I'm not sure if any of you fellas draw but an artist's mind gets tunnel vision and a sort of blindness to the finished piece.  That's why most artists flip their art or look at it in the mirror or come back to the drawing after a few hours to look at it with "Fresh" eyes.  I am REALLY lucky to have you guys!  You are pros at looking at erotic art and in particular Little Lorna in the nude!  That first look that you guys get when I first post anything is very VERY important!!!  Its like when you're cooking. You are constantly enveloped by the smells and constantly tasting it and that first taste that someone else gets will give you very important advise.  Too spicy?  More salt?  Needs more time cooking?

Don't feel hesitant for sending a note on any art.  I sometimes try your idea out, or I may save your comment for another artwork or I may full on disagree but it all helps!  In this one Sally said there was something wrong with the head size and didn't like the abbreviated breasts and VOILA... I think she was absolutely right (second image).  It was so minor that I didn't notice.

Thanks everyone for you small little inputs into the art and the stories.