Roses For Avalon | Page 92 | Lines (Patreon)
Published:
2024-02-20 19:00:07
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2024-07
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Not sure if I should bold "the stranger" in that dialogue, hmm hmm
Roshim is pretty expressive in these pages compared to the first chapter; we should definitely get the feeling that he's comfortable and maybe a little more naive
Let me know if something doesn't sit right with the dialogue, I've been staring at it for a minute