Roses For Avalon | Page 23 | Draft (Patreon)

Froy eats it

Although this fight is over quickly, maybe one page is too fast. I want the reader to feel the same surprise at how abrupt it is, that same feeling that folks like Guile and Leily experience

Roshim the hammer indeed. The point of this fight is to show the reader that Roshim can take damage and dish it in spades, what Roshim chooses to fight for, and his straightforward way of dealing with problems. It'll contrast later with Avalon