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Roshim the hammer indeed

Okay, so fight scenes are new to me, I'm figuring them out slowly. I like some of these stills but I don't think it conveys the right motion yet. Maybe I also need a reaction shot of Froy or the crowd on the next page to heighten the impact??

Either case, will be a good excuse to draw some tense muscles 

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Deviant

Also the thoughts we are seeing from Roshim here and on the page before this remind me of the Sherlock fight scene 😂

Maxwell_Edison

The dodge is good, but the first punch feels a bit stilted, not sure how I could describe it though. Think you did it best - doesn't 'convey the right motion' quite exactly right. Hmm.. Could be the punching arm, it doesn't quite twist around enough to be a hookshot but isn't straight enough to be a forward punch. What if it was a straight jab instead? Body pose the same, arm more extended. The pose during the first/fake punch implies to me an extended punch, as his bodyweight is still relatively back (as opposed to leaning forward) I am not an artist though, so this might not be great anatomical advice

Maxwell_Edison

+ The shot below where his left hand is cocking back, his right shoulder doesn't "look" like it's in the punch. It almost looks like both his arms are back, when my brain is telling me he should still be mid-right-punch when his Left arm is getting ready for the followup. The straight jab would transfer over to this shot, making it more apparent he's following up the right punch with a cheeky left one, as opposed to now where the more down position of the right shoulder implies he's already completely finished the right jab, retracted his arm completely, and THEN is readying the left hook. Which seems less like what's intended. Let me know if any of this makes sense at all haha