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You gotta watch out for anyone who calls themself a "son of heaven"

Leily and Roshim gotta be the ones who introduce us to this world. I don't have a great track record of world building in a concise way, so I'm going to do my best to stick to the characters and their interactions. It's tough to keep peoples' attention on this stuff, but I want to get better at storytelling in more exotic places

The world will be just enough of a stage to let Roshim, Avalon, and Leily do their thing. Appreciate everyone for sticking with me

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Awesomesauce

Jesus Leily, tell me your thirsty without telling me you’re thirsty.

AzorAhai

“Sticking with me” you say but your dialogue is pretty phenomenal and doesn’t feel like forced exposition. I’m just sad I only get a page at a time