Chasing Charlie | Page 16 | Lines (Patreon)
Published:
2022-12-12 17:00:13
Imported:
2022-12
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Whew, big redraft
The big negative space in the bottom of the page seems essential to communicating the emptiness in Josh's life after Charlie leaves. That kiss lingers long in his mind, I'm sure
There's a lot of text here so I might reorganize it. I don't like the way the hand is obscured
Apparently Josh kept one of the keys to his testarossa