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Whew, getting back into the workflow! This page isn't quite coming together the way I'd like, but hey, there are some good panels

Extended the prayer a bit, made things more obvious. At this point, the reader should be getting an idea of how knowledge is valued in Roshim's society, and the social weight behind many of Roshim's actions, as well as his personal closeness to Cristio and Rami

I'm trying not to overdo these flashback bits, but it feels necessary for the reader to feel this weight on Roshim's shoulders before he confronts Oidecalla

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Mr. Morebucks

I think you're doing a great job with the flashbacks! If it gets overwhelming, just remember if they feel they're getting too long, making prequel shorts or the like after the comic may reduce your stress load!

purplebirdman

Thanks! For sure, I’m only dropping as many as are necessary to bolster the main narrative