Roses For Avalon | Page 100 | Draft (Patreon)

Before things get crazy, it's time to spend some time with Avalon

This guy has been in the background for awhile, pretty low-key but with some odd vibes. It's time we peeled back a couple layers of both characters for the reader and let the shape of the story take more concrete form

A better writer might have been able to spend less time building up the character of Roshim. The entire first chapter fleshes out how Roshim approaches conflict, establishing him as someone who is disciplined in the application of his strength. The world at large also finds Roshim intimidating and capable

But Avalon has a different view of Roshim