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Early Chapter 35: Power Budgeting (Patreon)

Published:
2019-05-17 22:28:20
Imported:
2020-10

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(Moved to RoyalRoad.)

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NorkNork

Perhaps consider naming this measure of strength something? (Generation rate + lucrim invested in cores) = a person's Σ #. No one measure is going to be able to capture all aspects of a person. This doesn't take into account Rick's lucrore levels. And when Rick made his foundation more efficient, this measure would drop instead of increase.

Anonymous

Woo, a theory-and-mechanics-heavy chapter! Point of feedback: I found myself confused by this early sentence. "It was as gloriously stupid as promised and they quoted each other lines from it excessively before they got old." I read it a couple of times before I realized that the referent of "they" switched from the siblings to the lines from the show. I was trying to parse the meaning based on the siblings getting old and was very lost.

sarahlin
>>22823817

Hmm, I hadn't considered giving it a name. It won't play a major role in this book, but I'll consider it for the future.

sarahlin
>>22823957

Yeah, that sentence is a good candidate for rephrasing. Anyway, glad you liked the chapter!

sarahlin
>>22888920

I'll admit this is something I haven't thought about in deep detail, but I had in mind there being very different plans depending on how heavy a lucrim user you are.