Terra Nova: Part 1 - First Draft (Patreon)

Hey y'all! Sorry that I have been away for a while, but I promise that I was cookin up somethin juicy!

Anyway, this is the very first draft of the first part of my upcoming doc concerning the ill-fated Terra Nova expedition to Antarctica (1910-1913). This was originally meant to be a setting-up of the scene, the main characters, and a general introduction to let you know why the story is significant. It got too long, I think, and since this draft, I've made about 6 further revisions of this section to make it flow more naturally, add some more humanity to the narrative, correct any mistakes, etc.

The final cut will be quite a bit different than this, but the first draft will show you the general gist of things to come. Hope you enjoy!

-G.G.