Reject Force Ch.1: Uh Oh - Pages 1-24 [THUMBNAILS] (Patreon)

i've been head down working on this shit since getting off university, and as a "sorry for not having my shit together", i thought i'd let you all read the first third of Reject Force's first chapter early! these are all still in the rough stage, obviously, but i hope the art and layouts are still clear enough to be understood.

i'm looking to make this the absolute best i can, so any feedback is good feedback!