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I have gotten some feedback from a few people that my stories are too cruel, too mean spirited.

Now to be completely honest-- I actually hold back just how mean these stories could be.

But JocGo Epilogue exemplified how mean one of my stories could be and it was honestly my favorite one I've done so far.

Its not because I'm a mean person in real life, its because I feel the act of changing someone against their will is just kinda messed up no matter how you slice it, even if it ends up benefiting them in the end-- its just mean. So I write the tone to match the messed up nature of what Minzy does.

So with -that said- I want to know, do you guys feel like my dialogue, my stories, my tone is too cruel and unapologetic?

Sound off in the poll below.

Comments

Crazedking

Honestly the best tgtf or tf are either unexpected oopsies i.e. magic potions or walking into a tf closet OR bad guys getting their karma! In my opinion XD

MaxFloof

Honestly, I'd probably consider commissioning you just to write dialogue for a comic, not even having to draw it. I just love the cruelty in your pieces and the various ways you come up with humiliating and degrading your victims.

PaleRider

Honestly I'm somewhere between top and middle, not way too cruel just a lil uncomfortable at times

Anime Guy

If the person getting changed is deserving. Then the cruelty is just. However if the aftermath is beneficial to them and changes their outlook on who they where, then it’s ok in my book. An example would be Denny from jocgo epilogue. He didn’t deserve to be punished for Monika being a bitch, however it worked out way better for them and Monika got what she deserved. So if I’m being honest about this. I am ok with it as long as things work out in the end. Sorry for the long response.

Anonymous

No usually they deserve it

Anonymous

I really like the cruel stuff. Not to discount the other people's opinions but first off they usually deserve it and second it's very arousing to me lol. Really into bdsm stuff and it definitely plays into that. Would love to see more mocking from the person on the other end and begging from the person in the machine.

FallenFirefly

I see it the same as Inflation. Yes, filling yourself or someone else in REAL life would be.....potentially problematic, but in fantasy, in fetish? Nah. As long as a reader understands "This isn't Real, this isn't Normal, we're not pushing this AS Normal", then things are fine. My "kink" is "Do Not Want", so.....characters not being okay with what's happening to them....is.....kind of my thing. I DON'T like seeing people in real life going through situations they'd dislike or hate, but in a comic and fantasy setting? It's totally cool......ehhh, as long as things don't get too...."real", if you know what I mean.

Skai

I'm into the "unwilling" stuff in general. Where it crosses over from just unwilling over to a more cruel scenario, I'm also still very much into but I sort of need that narrative that the character deserved it and is being punished for their actions/behaviour.

Skai

All and all, I think your level of cruelty is fine and I wouldn't even mind it being more cruel. Just me personally I like the narrative that this person deserved it when it overly cruel. But hey, that's just me and by no means is a deal breaker for me, just a preference. Overall I love the transformation sequence quality and writing even when its not 100% to my preference ❤

Anonymous

Bad guy get bad karma= good