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Persona22

This was fun to read, but I feel like more could have been done with the last two pages.

kivalagracia

thank you for your input. There is more planned for these two characters. I considered having a lot more angles of what they were doing but it all felt like it was getting a bit gratuitous at that point, so I dialed it back. Specially since there is going to be a sequel comic that will include all the things I didn't do in this one. I want to explore their relationship further in the sequel comic, and use that as a driving reason to show the angles and positions I didn't use in this one. If any of that makes sense.

Persona22

I see, and yes, it makes sense. The comment was more on the lines of how what we see in the last two pages here is way more detailed, and with more "stuff" going on in previous stories of this "saga" (Jock 2 Goth, Alpha to Zeta). Will it be an actual sequel with those two, or it will be just a setup for another couple's story like we saw in the Jock 2 Goth encore?

kivalagracia

It'll actually be a little bit of both. It'll bounce back and forth between these two and another set of characters.