Donut Delinquent Chapter 3 "FINAL EDIT" (Patreon)

As with Chapter 1 and Chapter 2 before it, attached below is the "Final Draft" of Chapter 3, where I go in and fix any art/dialogue errors I made drawing the comic. Not having an editor means things can slip through the cracks! 

Patch Log:

Page 45: Gave the characters shadows, added shelving that appears on the wall in Page 46 but not here. Didn't like how I drew Leo's eyes so... I just closed them. 

Page 46: Gave the characters shadows, removed dialogue referring to Lisbeth dropping Kimi off at the airport since I implied later that Lisbeth had only just woke up later in the same chapter. 

Page 48: replaced the garage door outside the Kabocha Cafe with the window Lisbeth looks into later on in the chapter. 

Page 50: Put one of my pre-rendered backgrounds in the first panel to make it look less like a red void. 

(On this note, Do the pre-rendered backgrounds in this chapter look fine to everyone? I saw this suggested by another artist and I've been experimenting with it for the cafe scenes. I drew up a long shot that had a bunch of art on the walls and restaurant booths, and I just kind of paste it under the regular art. more dramatic panels of course, get the background still drawn in. May or may not do this going forward with the classroom as well so I don't have to draw the same windows/tables every time and all that!)

Page 56: Drew Leo in a long sleeved shirt in this panel even though he's in a short sleeve for the rest of the chapter. Fixed it. 

Page 60: Shaded Leo's wet hair, also made his shirt look wet. 

Overall, considerably less edits than previous chapters needed! Feels like I'm getting better at this! 

Edit: For some reason when I scheduled this last night I referred to it as a "PDF". It's uh, not lol, just a zip folder with all the pages in it. Sorry for causing any confusion!