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Here, as promised, are the sketched pages featuring the brutal battle between Black Canary's strike force and Darkseid. As you can see, it went about as well as all the other heroes' attempts... He didn't even need the help of his Female Furies!

It's been a while since I looked at these sketches and I was surprised how finished they actually are. The action reads more coherently than I remember and there are some choice moments -- check out the look on Dinah's face as Darkseid's hand covers her mouth or Booster's vicious dismemberment (I must've been thinking of Infinity Crisis when I drew this).

One of the reasons this did drop off, IIRC, is that I felt it took too long to get to the rape. In earlier chapters (and in Submission Agenda) I liked to get to the first female nudity by page 9-10, and clearly it doesn't happen here until 12. Plus with the two featured heroines and more complex flashback narrative, I knew this would end up being a double-length chapter, at least.

There just wasn't a lot of incentive for me to finish it in those days, before Patreon... but I suppose there is now.

I similarly have sketches (and some inked pages) from the unseen Finale to Submission Agenda (also would have been a double-length chapter, I think). You'll see those eventually, if you're interested! But I think some Submission Agenda Minis might be in the cards before that. ;)

I hope you've enjoyed this exclusive look at a long-unfinished project of mine.

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Anonymous

Not bad! It's always interresting to see your process of creation.

Jose

Very interested!

Anonymous

It's such a relief to see that there was more to the chapter than the finished pages you shared all those years ago. Honestly had been checking your imgur to see if you'd ever add this chapter along with the rest of them. Either way, glad to see it even in sketch form. The way you lay out things reminds me a lot of how I do it. I wouldn't mind seeing more of your WIPs to be honest.

Subjectivity

I also wouldn't mind skipping the brutal hero murders to get to the rape, heh. I appreciate a longer fight with the character he's going to fuck, but the others could just be smacked aside in the first couple pages. Seeing heroes get killed makes me sad. My favorite scenario would probably be a line of dialog to explain why the male heroes aren't even there, leaving a full team of heroines he can defeat and fuck one by one, in front of each other.

Anonymous

I think the build up adds to it tbh. It's more fun to see Superheros get torn down when they've got the illusion of power in the first place

liqueo

MORE !!!! this is why most of us started following you !!! Submission Agenda and Whores of DarkSeid is legendary !!!!

Anonymous

I so hope you'll decide to complete this one day :)

pegasusart

Thanks very much! Feels good to have a place to finally share these, even unfinished. When I looked back at these recently I was surprised how developed they really were in terms of layout and pacing. I have plenty more unfinished or sketch pages. Perhaps I’ll share some of the sketches of my newer work, or other chapters that never concluded. Again, this is why I was considering a new subscription tier.

pegasusart

Haha I hear you loud and clear. I’m working on new Submission Agenda pages now (already 4 pages done of a new 16-page story) and I have Wonder Woman content planned beyond that!

pegasusart

Considering how popular it seems to be — Darkseid material always gets a huge reaction — I think it’s fair to say this will be revisited in some form eventually.