First Fellow Patreon Suggested Comic Idea! (Patreon)

So our biggest sponsors made a wonderful comic suggestion to me earlier this week involving:

Just throwing this out there, what about something like a scene where

she's "giant" and terrorising a city? Cut away to find she's normal

sized and in a miniature city for a new monster movie, and the director

rejects her as "not big enough". She storms off, trips on a cable and

falls into a nearby swimming pool... "How bout now?" from her, or

"That's more like it!" or similar from the director. Just the right

blend of funny and hot.

I have had it translated into a three page comic which will be getting done next month. So heres a preview and if anyone has any feedback/suggestions let me know. This is after all a collaborative process!

Page 1:

Panel 1: A Godzilla-like giant

monster is between tall buildings slightly taller than it, wreaking havoc

 

Panel 2: The monster is breaking a

skyscraper when a loud “CUT!” is heard off panel.

 

Panel 3: We see a director standing

in front of a very cheap movie set. 

Isabelle is in a poorly stitched together, ill-fitting lizard

outfit.  “No no no… it just isn’t right…”

he mutters

 

Panel 4: Side shot of Isabelle

facing the director. “What now?  I

thought that was pretty good!”; Director: “Yeah, the acting was fine but… It

needs to be…”

 

Panel 5: “… bigger!”  We see a confused and slightly sad Isabelle.

 

 

Page 2:

Panel 1: Isabelle muttering to

herself, walking past the set’s “lake” (just a tall inflatable pool) where her

sister Annabelle is standing with a coffee. 

“Hey Isa… you okay?”

 

Panel 2: Isabelle stops and leans

on the edge of the pool.  “Ugh, it’s the

director.  Said I need to be bigger in my

performance or something.” Annabelle looks at her sister’s somewhat crestfallen

face. 

               

Panel 3: Anna glances at the pool

behind them.

 

Panel 4: With a mighty sway of her

wide hips, Anna bumps Isabelle into the pool, as she continues to nonchalantly

sip her drink.  “Annaaaaa!!” Isabelle

shouts.

 

 

Page 3:

Panel 1-3: In fairly small panels,

we see a couple close-up shots of various parts growing, stretching the suit

out, such as her chest and legs.

               

Panel 4: Annabelle grabs Isabelle’s

flailing arm. “That should be big enough,” she comments.

 

Panel 5: With a smack to the tall figure

now standing next to her, Anna says, “Now, knock ‘em dead, tiger!”

 

Panel 6: Isabelle is back on the

set, the suit is super tight and bits of her skin can be seen through the

stitches.  Her bust is massive so that she’s

now clearly seen through the costume’s fabric. 

She’s now at least two feet taller, now towering over the fake

skyscrapers.  “I’m ready for my close-up

now…” she says seductively.  The director

is grinning awkwardly, trying to hide what’s going on in his pants.  He thinks to himself, “Need to give make-up a

raise.”