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Hello my amazing patrons :)

I wrote this last night and thus far my producer's reaction was "oof" and my mom's reaction was "JEEZ" so I think it hits home xD.  We still need to refine it a bit, especially the verses and bridge, but I'm very excited by this song.

Enjoy! 

xxMKR


Lyrics:

VERSE 1

You’d watch her sing at the bar next door

You couldn’t keep it hidden anymore

You’d light up every time her eyes met yours

So you tell her how you feel

She admires your honesty

You knew your heart, and she could clearly see

I know you’re nervous but hey at least

you told her how you feel

CHORUS

As long as you showed her

all that I know you to be

If she’s anything like me

she’ll fall in love

If she’s anything like me

she’ll fall in love

VERSE 2

I watch you slip into a plot line

From a tale as old as time

The familiar bells ringing loud in my mind

But I can’t tell you how I feel

I guess my healing is a little slow

But your newfound fire is free to grow

Besides it’s her turn to bask in it’s glow

So I’ll never tell you how I feel

CHORUS

As long as you showed her

all that I know you to be

If she’s anything like me

she’ll fall in love

If she’s anything like me

she’ll fall in love

BRIDGE

It’s like I’m looking in my rear view mirror

At memories that time is making clearer and clear

I only hope she holds everyone of them dear

Cause I’m pretty sure I know how she feels

CHORUS

As long as you showed her

all that I know you to be

If she’s anything like me

she’ll fall in love

If she’s anything like me

she’ll fall in love

Comments

Anonymous

Oh my. That moment when the chorus rolls in and the meaning hits you. Oof indeed

Brent Dreher

Good stuff! Took me a second to catch onto the rhyming scheme for the verses (aaab/cccb), but it's really nice and relaxing, especially the end part.

Anonymous

Oof/jeez! Can't say I've ever been in that sort of position and I hope you aren't, but I love the song. As far as relationship-is-over songs go, it's quite the contrast with the one you played the wrong version of for us yesterday!

Anonymous

The song is amazing she doesn't need to change it at all I love all her stuff

Anonymous

Love it. I can't wait to hear it with music!

Anonymous

Damn this one hits home, I've been there with my last girlfriend... The sad melody conveys the melancholy I sometimes feel but I'm also honestly happy for her because she found someone who makes her smile so much. Great song, thank you for sharing it. :)

Anonymous

Wow .... I really like this. I'm sure you will tweak it, but what you have now is excellent.

Anonymous

Damn that really does hit. Dunno if it even needs more than maybe a second take before it'd be good to go, but still interested in where you take it.

Anonymous

Ouch. A bit too close to home there.

Anonymous

Your voice, the lyrics, the overall tune, narrates this song beautifully.

Anonymous

That song was great and I love it. You have a great talent.

Anonymous

I absolutely love this song

Anonymous

I like this one but I'm mostly posting a message because my last message took me to 13 and I'm vaguely superstitious about 13s.

Anonymous

I have no words except, wow.