Author Question: Has My Pace Been Improving? (Patreon)

I know the biggest problem most people have with my series is the amount of detail I can put into characterization, which is a double-edged sword.  I've been really trying to adapt my style a bit to push things forward more and do more 'tell' not 'show' as I usually show 'everything' in the characters' lives.

How as things been for you in the series as I've tried to adapt things?  I'd just like to see what you guys think about how my balancing attempts have been coming along.