Monday Comic Edit (Patreon)
Published:
2019-03-04 03:15:18
Imported:
2024-03
Content
Okay, I'm not in love with the original version, and I think I like the way this one is framed a little better.
It feels like it makes more sense (I think I created a metaphor disconnect in the original re: why I'm talking about loot drops but showing cookies and broccoli), and this one also makes the whole thing a little less obvious from the get-go.
Happy to listen to feedback though.