Book 2 cover Rough draft feedback (Patreon)

So, Here's the rough draft. We're probably gonna do one more revision, then call it good. The artist sadly couldn't fit Mass Driver in the picture and still have space for Heather and Perry's expression to be visible in thumbnail.

Give me feedback! Then scroll through the feedback you like, and heart the stuff you think sounds like a good idea. I Personally like the background and posing but want Heather to be more aggressive/animated.

Perry looks a bit too much like prof. X, lol.

Lemme know what you think!