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I personally think the whole thing looks a little derpy, but I'm pretty sure it'll be cleaned up and presentable in about a week when it's got full shading and colors, and stuff. The lady's bottom is RIDICULOUSLY exposed, but I doodled a crappy thong on and sent that back to the artist. see below.
Without the thong, the butt is egregiously exposed, which was the point. don't worry, though, if it's still way too low, I have a talented photoshopper who can pull up her pants an inch or two in post-production.
The guy also took the more cartoonish look suggestion for Wilson and fixed the shape of the spines. I sent him a reminder of the spine's color. My biggest issue is Garth's face looks derpy, but i think it just isn't filled in yet. Hopefully. Also, I dunno if she's touching him or what?
Itet got her extra arm.
The Sandi shadow in the upper portion reminds me of The Witch's Hand. A little bit.
Anyway, feel free to comment. If there's anything you absolutely hate...well, probably a bit too late to change it.