Review and leave notes on my D&D video script! (Patreon)

Since a few of you have expressed interest on checking out my new D&D script, I figured I'd just make a post about it here! So here's the link.

Feel free to leave notes on the google doc for anything that you think is uninteresting or needs to be changed. Or if something is very good!

Here are my concerns:

• Firstly, it's long. It's going to be like 45 minutes again, and I'd rather it be half that time. So if that means cutting out a LOT of stuff, I'm cool with that. Be brutal! I just wrote and wrote and I feel like a lot of stuff is probably uninteresting.
• I'm worried I simultaneously spend too much time talking about Dimension 20 while also not really selling it well to people. So if you've never seen the show, let me know if it sounds interesting to you. If you have seen the show, let me know if I did a good job or if I should add stuff.
• Part 3 of the video has most of the interesting stuff while also having what are probably the most boring parts. So heavy edits are expected there.
• I'm also just worried that none of this is interesting at all. It's just my personal story, and nothing about it is particularly unique or interesting, imo. But I love D&D and I love Dimension 20 and I just wanted an outlet to talk about stuff I love right now. Not sure if I did a good job of making the video worthwhile in general.

So let me know about all of those points. I want to make this shorter, tighter, and as interesting and fun as it can be! I appreciate the help! Also, the title is just tentative. I will probably change it.