Darth Talon (Patreon)

They say the Dark Side is a path to many abilities some may call "unnatural." Turns out that includes using the Force to build up great big muscles on yourself. Maybe if she keeps it up she'll be able to defeat the Jedi once and for all.

I was going to say I knew nothing about this character, as my Star Wars Legends knowledge is fairly lacking. But, I ended up looking up the character in writing the little snippet and learned about her, and how what I was writing was totally wrong for the character.

A few things I could tweak with this one if I use her again. For instance, the blade of the light saber should really be a white core with red outline, rather than this purely red blade.