More or Less Text in Comic? (Patreon)

So Im still trying to figure out how exactly I should go about certain aspects and am hoping you could help me decide. 

Below Ive attached two images of the same page. One where I added additional text, and one to show what the page currently looks like.
Which do you prefer ? Should I add the additional text to other pages and future comics, leave the pages without the additional text, or somewhere in the middle?
Feedback as always is hugely appreciated. Feel free to comment below or message me. 

As a side note, I have made some small changes to the pages and updated the censored version so its not black bars anymore if you want to check that out. Chris is wearing a lab coat post transformation now. lol Let me know what you think!