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2020-05-03 10:01:56
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2023-09-02 05:26:14
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Okey I was not sure about the way to act of montimer so 

I am working in this new direction 

he is being honest now but that doesn’t change the fact that there are some of tension between then 


thanks for support me and sorry if my English  is yet bad
I LOVE to read all yours comments

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MRtynz

Wish we could have seen more of this comic

Carly Keone

I like this direction for the comic a lot better. I’d be stoked if more of it was made!!!

Flux Y.

Yeah i like this monti so far. I also like the slight change on why he will take care of ronnie. Its nice that its similar but differnet from the main story

Alex Talbain

I like this version better

Angel Gabriel

Me gusta mucho mas cómo se ve esta versión xD y no te preocupes por tu inglés, ya lo vas a mejorar :) muchas gracias por entretenernos en estos dias de cuarentena. Aún me pongo a leer el comic desde cero y no me aburre y siempre me hace llorar :') gracias.

yinller
>>36263011

Awww que tierno me vas a dar azúcar de lo dulce que eso sonó

TheGrimm85

I wonder, Larry can’t stay in home for the rest of his life for keeping his location a secret. Also, how does he go to school, ore meet his friends Deby, Jack, Mourice ?

Colt-Lasky

Ah yes, this version of Monti is better! His reasons for keeping Larry are more credible regarding the situation. Great job. ^^

Chang TingHao

We also need the fox here !

Cy

This version of Monti is better~

Cosmo

As others are saying, I also like this direction much better with the dialogue. Don’t feel bad about your English either, I believe most understand this isn’t your first language and know how difficult it is. If you would like some help, I’m more than happy to proofread and offer corrections if you ever wish and I’m sure others would also do the same.

Isaiah Youngbrown

Yes and now the dark vibes are gone..... were you feeling you didn't want to follow the same story devices as your other comic?

Vamps

I think the honesty approach Montimer took is good.

3DMM0r

Similar, but different. Interesting, as it will be different from the main story later? It is right now.

Flux Y.

Im unsure if you ever said it somewhere yinllr, but will these ever be colors like the main comic or will they stay as they are now?

Rainor

This way is more logical :)

Rea Arts

This is really good so far.

Anonymous

I'm liking where this is going. The feel to the story flows nicely.

Sadie the Goldfish

I like this more than monti being really creepy and threatening. This seems more like our regular Monti :)