Lauren's editorial notes on the Moon People intro (Patreon)

As we've mentioned on the show before, Lauren is the Executive Editor of the magazine Diabetic Living, and has worked as an editor both at magazines, websites, and the health care industry for most of her professional career. So Mike suggested we get her to provide editorial notes for DMC's Moon People intro. I had no idea she would give it the FULL editorial treatment. But here we go: it's A) all the audio we didn't have time to use and B) the google doc of her edited notes. And this is just the intro!!! Imagine what an edit of the whole, terrible book would look like.