Student Life (Script) (Pages 01,04,14) (Patreon)
Content
Page 01
Our protagonist is a 24 year old student named Manny Scott. The main plot of the story revolves around the story of Manny moving to a new country to study psychology and the strange events that change his life forever. For the first time in Manny’s life he would be living alone; away from his parents.
- Manny has breakfast with his parents, they tell him that studying at this university will change his life forever.
- Manny hugs his baby brother goodbye before getting in the family car and he (the baby brother) tells him that he’ll miss him.
- Manny’s parents wave goodbye to him as he’s entering the passport check point inside the airport.
- We see a jet flying away.
- (2 weeks later) We get an establishing shot of a Bar, Manny is sitting at the bar on his cellphone.
- The bar tender puts a drink in front of him and tells him that that one (the drink) is on the house.
- Manny says “thank” and asks the bartender “Yo! Where are all the hot girls tonight?”
Page 04
[Remember from this point on to draw Mannys glass on the carpet besides his couch, he left it there and will use it later on in the story]. [Come Up with the specific phrases that Rob shouts at manny to be ones that the trans escort tells him later on in order for the trigger moment to happen down the line] He (his “friend”) would then attempt to shove his cock in Manny’s mouth but Manny would manage to fight his way out of the situation by violently attacking away his “friend”...
- [Quick Shot] (Close Up) Rob grabs Mannys hips from behind.
- [Quick Shot] (Close Up) Robs cock penetrating Mannys ass.
- Shot of Rob ramming manny in the ass as he starts to snap out of it and screams, “ooooooohhhhh”, though bubble (“what is happening, I feel so much pain. I feel dizzy... is it something he put in my drink?).
- Rob grabs at mannys head and pulls it back, rob is still ramming him in the ass as Mannys head is tilted back. Rob says “Fuck that feels gooood, you’re so tight!”
- [Quick Shot] Close up of Manny screaming as robs hands are in his mouth.
- [Quick Shot] Same as above; Mannys head is facing down now as slobber is dripping from his mouth.
- [Quick Shot] Same as above; Mannys head is up as his eyes are wide open, slobber all over robs hand and his mouth, Mannys screams “ooooooohhhhhh.... aaaaaahhhhh” rob screams “yes! You like that? You wanted a good time right?”
- Manny is face down and in pain as rob gets away from that area of his body and is stepping more towards his head. Rob says “yess, your ass was so tight... I see you liked that, how about you suck on it now?”
- [Quick shot] rob dick slaps manny across the face. Sfx “THWAP!”
Page 14
[You have more real estate to tell more establishing stories of manny pondering everything in thought bubbles as he rides inside an Uber. You can use the bullies more etc. Expand the page to 7 panels] In fear for his life Manny continues on with his days at college, he’s faced with a lot of looks from strangers and he starts realising how polarising these excessive hair extensions have made him. On the one hand guys ridicule him and laugh behind his back as he walks past them, on the other hand girls who he has never talked to before compliment him on his beautiful new hair.
- [The Next Morning] We see Manny sitting on his bed pondering with one hand touching his scalp. Thought Bubbles, “I cant believe that happened last night. Cheekz... she was the one with the scar on her face.
- [Close up on Manny, panel within panel] It doesn’t make any sense why they would just put me back in my apartment... and with this shit on my head. Those twisted fucks. It was that shemale prostitute, this is all her fault. I think last night was a warning. Why do I always get myself in these situations.... I need to stay away from people like that. I gotta get to class... I’ll just put a hoodie on today, hide this hair and lay low. Once I get home this afternoon I’ll figure out how to get it off my head.”
- [Capilano University] Establishing shot of Capilano University.
- Manny walks the halls with his head down, his body language is conservative (Close up Shot on Manny with dudes in the background stearing at him). Manny has thoughts, “fuck these things on my head hurt. Everyone is looking at me... I can’t believe they did this to me, that damn prostitute... what did I gotten myself into...”
- [Panel within panel] We get a shot of the two jocks looking at him, one guy says “nice hair man... haha...
- [Panel within panel] We see the laughing mouths of another group of students, “you got some balls”
- [Panel within panel] as manny slightly turns his head towards them, his expression is that of surprise.
- [Panel within panel] We get a shot of the three girls conversions about him, “Whoa, is that Manny Scott?, did he get a weave.. what the fuck...”