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Save a Horse, Ride a Cowboy [TG, Bimbo] Full Story (Patreon)

Published:
2020-09-19 16:11:45
Edited:
2020-09-19 17:53:58
Imported:
2021-07

Content

"Save a horse, Ride a Cowboy"  <== Click here

YouTube version

"Two friends on a road trip end up in a small ranch area.
They can't help but make fun of the farmers, and by the end of the day,
there are two more ranch cowgirls happy to "ride" the locals."  

Al, thank you so much for the help! 

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Comments

Ravyn

Am I doing something wrong the bottom of every slide gets cut off

Ravyn
>>44438765

Yes, and comparison it is actually almost 2 lines cut off

Mirali83

This was very well done; loved the stylistic choices and imagery. One thing to try is not necessarily, like, always going for the, like, totally valley girl speech pattern thingy? For example, y'all might could've gone and stuck with the good ol' country gal accent y'all was fixin' to give Daisy there before ya went an' made her talk like one uh them there city gals from Cal-ee-forn-ya. Seriously though, wonderful story; I always enjoy your work. :-)

StevenC
>>44460950

Yeah. That's what I've been thinking to add, but the problem is that the south twang is hard to read. Some readers may get distracted from the narrative. But yeah, the idea is good :)

StevenC
>>44438765

Please, let me know if you want more stories on YouTube, if that works for you.

Mirali83
>>44460950

Completely understand the competing concerns there. It's a tough balance between trying to maintain immersion with a new dialect while also making things intelligible to all.

Unit369M

Nice, but not good story. One of the worst your stories.