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Alright, I know I said a few days. But after I sat down to figure this thing out, I honestly got completely lost with the way I want to approach it.
Like I got a bunch of puzzle pieces scattered around and simply couldn't find the one that fits.
Had to sleep on it a couple of times to get something coherent in my head.

Now, I'm still pretty nervous to post it because this type of content is just deep unknown woods for me. And I would really like to hear your thoughts on it.

Any good faith criticism, pointing to mistakes, or praise would be very appreciated. I might revisit and change these pages if necessary.

I know there is no real smut yet but it will come, I want also to try to make it look "cool" and not just horny dumb shit.

I'm already working on the next page and I promise it will come waaaay sooner.

Okay, Thank you as usual!

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Lobster29

Guilty, man, have faith in yourself. I think you’re doing great. I love the comic style so far, and I really do like the details you’ve got, including that 65.4 (nice) and the two lollipop licking frames (get that sexual tension rolling). I guess like what others have said, as long as the model and the sex scenes r great, we’d all be happy bout it and I think we all have faith in your ability to make this comic great! Also, I’d expect some juicy hardcore 69 scenes since the comic is taking place on Earth-65.4. Anyway, we all trust you and you got this, Guilty! Keep it up!

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