Production Notes (October 2019 - Week 2) (Patreon)

Hi guys!

This week we'll have a second test for Cumming Hotel, and I would like to discuss a few things.

Narrative and dialogues improvements

As you all know, writing is a hard skill to improve without practicing, so I’ve decided to work on Cumming Hotel's (CH) narrative (and dialogues) in another way. How did I do that? Examining all texts that I’ve written until now, and rewriting what I think can be improved! As this project is at the beginning (we have about 5k words), I thought it is a good time to work on it! Also, as Kyle and Bruce's personalities were too "flat", I'm trying to make them based on opposite sides. Bruce is more naive while Kyle is more mischievous. You can see these changes in this new version (including in the adult scenes). I hope you all like it and give me some feedback about it. I intend to do this every week so this is the reason why I'll start to write Dev Posts every two weeks. Sketches, CGs, and other stuff will be posted at the same rate as usual.

New closed test on Friday 11th

For those who are in Nasty Boy tier or above, Friday I'll post the link and the new version for CH Guide so that you can test it. For the other ones, I’ve already started a raffle on Male Doll's Discord so you can join in, go to #giveaway channel and react to the Giveaway Bot's comment. There will be 4 spots available and this raffle ends on Friday 11th.

Buzba - The Minotaur

The artist has already started the new character that will arrive in CH (Buzba), but as we have 3 new adult scenes, I've decided to implement it in our third unstable build. I'll post the sketches and the final version soon.

Stay tuned!

Victoria