Wan-Wan comic (Patreon)

This is sort of a test for the webcomic I have planned. It'll have small 3 panel comic strips and also full pages with around 4-6 panels. The premise right now is just a simple slice of life that follows Mary and friends and her modeling career.

I'd like to get some feedback on what could be improved, like how the panels are structured, if characters don't actually talk like an actual person, etc.

Also for those who don't live on the East coast of the US. Wan-Wan's a parody of a convenience store named Wawa.

I'm really looking forward to working on this more. Hope to have more to show soon!