John sketch part 2 (Patreon)

What do you think now? I still have to polish more things but I think it's taking shape, I think I have to correct some mistakes but I can probably finish this illustration in a few days, by the way Raven is also there hahaha. Tell me what you think and what you think I should correct / add / modify, as always I read all your comments, I am also working on the next update of Supersoldier but it is a bit complicated since I have been reading a lot about history for the upcoming events, I know that I said that history should not be taken as a historical reference and that the events that happen during and after the Second World War are not "faithful or realistic representations" even so I feel that I must have a certain basic historical context to be able to modify the events of appropriately and not just writing "this happened because I wanted it that way lol" so an apology for the delay.