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WIP page 15 (Patreon)

Published:
2017-10-17 21:09:13
Imported:
2020-10

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Reminder: This will be finished before October 30.

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asafk8

In the last pannel "thing your packing" should be "thing you're packing". You can also somewhat change the sentence to "This thing you're packing is an absolute monster, Jake." instead of how his name is there in the middle of it now to make it sound a little better. The 2nd time the word 'your' is used, in the last sentence, ("your family name") is okay. :3