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Chapter 231 - 104 Gaw(Franky): Conflict

Yesterday, the Adventurer's Guild arrived onboard the Tempestas, which is currently anchored at Liekings port. Today, a partially destroyed pirate ship is anchored next to it. The ship is small compared to the Tempestas, but still large enough for a good sized [Pirate] crew. Franky scratches the ...

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Arnon Parenti

This is a very odd cliff to hang on, and half a chapter going about Gunwidow, with nothing from the lady herself leaves a bad taste for me. Sorry to be harsh, but the whole chapter feels like a half baked outline and completely below your usual standard, I would rather you take a couple more days to do it justice than get an idea pitch for something that could be fun to read someday.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

QuasiEludo

Be harsh. Honest opinions help me improve. I'll take your comments to heart and will look into upping the chapter quality.